Voted For: KO-Cain

ok @ this is the second shit by you i read in topical tonight your topicals lack good imagery and emotion vocab strture and flow is good you need to use more metaphore in your shit sun and make it more vivid dont jump so much explore on the parts more in descrition sun your lack og imagery and emotion hurt you here again.
ko kain good flow and emotion dope imagery you walked me through this here which wins all topicals you showed me the picture while your oppenat failed to do it good drop you get my vote

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