Voted For: J~FOUR

Legend you came as if u werent focused in this battle
you need 2 work on your punches alot more kid
ive seen some of your other battles and dont focus
so much on havein diff colored barz...focus on ya punches
ya similies werent there.ya wordplay was basic
ya setup and delivery were basic..i understood wha u was tryin
2 say but u could of came alot more edgy and direct...work on ya metas and multis..and setting up a punch...jus dont use words 2 fill in or 2 rhyme with

Four
this is the 1st drop ive seen from u son..let me state
dont worry bout all those dashes and bold letters and shit
that dont mean nuttin ..jus drop ya bars and get tha shit ova
this was an ok drop..u won in my eyes wit ya punches
some were kinda played but there were aight
ya opener and middle was good but ya closer was pure garbage
could of been re worded..work on ya set ups and delivery and metas and multies

overall aight battle boyz..but i wanna see better next time

*Nuff Said*

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