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Old 02-05-05, 02:15 AM   #12
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Voted For: Drama Queen

ok thirdself lines were kinda streched here flow was off which doesnt make snese you should have that down pat being a producer and all anyways imagery was ok vocab couldve been better here also you aint really bring me into your story emotion lacked here as well as imagery too
drama queen damn your getting dope at topicals good vocab and flow lil streched cut your damn lines shorter imagery was dope it was as if i was there in your mind good shit it was like a movie and that wins topicals and got you this dope.
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