i like how the way you wrote this, i kinda agree wit D J emcee .....about the Hennessey part NAW JUST JOKIN! lol.. you can tell that you want to elevate in the poetic side of text, which i believe you will soon, because i notice you are writing in a stand point where people can understand where you are coming from, once you know people can get on your level then you can get more descriptive wit ya words and express the lines the way you want the reader to take it in.. you on your way, keep droppin that hot stuff, i'mma keep supportin' your workz.. stay up.. 1

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