Both weren't too original in fact but it's hard to come very creative with this topic (it's possible though). But Acuity allowed himself to use more emotion because he twisted the topic towards a girl.

Whyte Ave: was feeling your flow and you had me focussed throughout the whole thing, vocab was good and structure was nice to. Could've used some more imagery and emotion though but wasn't that easy with your view on the topic, it's hard to write a very emotional piece then...Good job nonetheless...

Acuity: hard to come original with this topic but I loved the twist in the ending where the obsession disappears. Vocab was tight, found a good balance there, had your flow on lock and structure made it easy to read. You had strongest emotion for sure because of your twist of the topic, solid drop!

My vote goes to Acuity...no hate...

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