Odi et Amo
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Anxiety: the strongest aspect of your verse was definately the emotion, so strong and described in such a vivid way. Imagery was nice and I could actually see and hear the screaming and arguements. Was feeling your flow, structure was good and found good balance with your vocab. You always keep it quite simple and yet, you manage to express everything in such a raw way...solid drop!
BigChase: your vocab was more complex but it didn't support the emotion which lacked in your verse. Had your flow on lock and the structure was good, imagery could've been better. It was fairly obvious you didn't put too much effort into it...but overall, it was on okay drop...no hate...
Vote goes to Anxiety
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