I am a big fan of this peice indeed brother.

DAMN! some real good lines. I loved these two:

"I aint stoppin till my pockets stay swole like AC Slater"

"Famz im on fire,not banks but ya know im hungry 4 more"

there were a lot of good lines but these stuck out.

Your structure was good, your flow was way cool. Vocab nice.
Only quarm, (please take it as constructive critism) is that during the second verse, it seemed to drift a little of the quality of the rest and got a little less enjoyable to read. If you just threw in a couple lines like the two above wud have remedied that.

But it was cool. 8/10

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