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Old 02-05-05, 08:54 AM   #21
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Voted For: shadow

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ: found good balance in your vocab, structure was nice but your flow was off here and there. Emotion was good because of the personal vibe over it, not that much imagery, you had an "in your face" sort of attitude,saying everything like it was. So imagery and maybe vocab a lil could've been better...Overall good drop...

shadow: very deep, had your flow on lock, vocab was tight and structure was good.Emotion was raw and you made me think about some things which is nice of course. Imagery was dope, enjoyed reading this for sure! Very good job!

Vote goes to shadow because I was feeling the message a lil more, no hate...RTF please (link is in my sig)
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