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Old 02-05-05, 09:42 AM   #17
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

d.j em sce

Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^nice opener

Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
^could've been worded better to hit harder

All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^nope...

Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^last line okay,not feeling first

An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^like first line,second was just to end it...

Overall good battle but you could've worded some things better so they hit harder.Punches n personals were good,vocab was nice and structure was cool. Had your flow on lock but I think you could've come harder...


C.A.L.I


Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^hehe,nice opener

You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^good good..

Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
^good set-up...

Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!
^hehe,oh so true...lol...

Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^haha,nice...

Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
^dope closer

Dope battle,had hardhitting personals and punches in there,vocab was good and structure was tight.Definately feeling your flow, my favo line was the one with the audio battle. It seemed as if you had a more aggressive tone to your verse compared to his so that's why my vote goes to you...
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