Voted For: phive

winner- phive

check it.
I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course,
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke,
and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE
Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step
cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep
Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best,
i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST
Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday,
so take this loss in a friendly way
cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ!

aight, u had decent punches(they need improvement though), your vocab needs to improve, u had some nice inner rhyming.



im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist//
you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool//

nice inner rhyming, punches were pretty good but need improvement, had a little bit of wordplay, not too bad overall



you two are pretty evenly matched, so nice battle