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^^what they said lol no I mean it was a good peice but like dj emcee said you need a different vocabulary then regualr texts and you need to really paint a picture with your words witht the imagery you use you dont want them to just read it and be like oh nice peice you want them to see and feel what your trying to say..just keep at it..its all good
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