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Old 02-05-05, 02:44 PM   #13
Sik Wit It
 
Posts: 5,817
From: Florida
This was feedback posted for Tha Sickness

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Whats this cat thinking, trying ta battle me/
You Couldnt throw out a punch line, if u were Notorious B.I.G./
decent punch, played
Kidz foolish sayen he THa Sickness/
You PrOBALLY stab ya own man in tha back, and say its strictly business/
no, punch was weak
I aint tryin ta hate, im juss tryin ta spit facts/
you a no body, probally the type who be thinkin he be black/
but he looks in the mirror and see's the opposite of that/
decent, kinda weak but was aight
I aint no busta, I go out on every limb/
Battelin with confidence, always knowin i can win/
weak closer

overall ur drop was all played, hardly any
punches were hard-hittin and landed, elevate more


i see ya one nothin record, but it was claimed by default
ima break yo winning streak, bring it right to a hault //
decent opener
maybe you should learn to hold ya own in tha crew
then King~~Dipset wouldnt have to snip, snip, cut you //
nice persona, punch landed
ima rip you apart and gut you, cuz you worship Satan the unholy
ya childish and fictious, like rolie polie olie //
weak punch, flow was choppy
im takin control, i got my finger on tha button, im yurnin
one push and poof, your reduced to nuttin, eternity in fire sufferin //
decent closer

overall you had a decent drop, u had a nice persona
and the punches were aight there, but overall u took this
oneā€¦elevate more tho
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