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Old 02-05-05, 02:53 PM   #25
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: CounTREE Jay

I eat these commercial Mcz for dinner, but I don't even really like tha beef,
If your bark is worse than your bite, somehow you musta lost your teeth.
decent opener, punch landed
Prolly tan from all the sunnin'z, so I know what you did last summer,
1009 a tribute to the girls you spit it at, just writin' random numbers.
decent punch here, flow was good, landed…
Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter.
nice punch it connected here
Lines can be long and heavy, mine still ahead by years of light,
Name COMICal, only 1 Jay that makes niggaz MARVEL on the Site.
decent closer, kinda weak though but was good

overall you had a good drop, punches were hard-and landed
structure was in place and the flow was good with it…decent drop
from you


dis not ya lucky-day,so afta u get hit wit da pumps-we-spray
"pussy" u'll b hangin from "da branch" datz whut i call a "CUNT-TREE-jay"
decent opener, flow was choppy to it
no u wasn't on da phone with ya wifey fam...u dis like bitches
only time "change- skins" u tryin da "veiw dis site different"....
decent punch, kinda weak but was aight, flow was okay
go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
weak punch, wasn’t much feelin it here
ima make sure dis prick's ghost....i'll doubt u'll even make dis shit close.....
out in "Ny" u da "HERB dat be on da sideline" like da "knicks coach"
can’t say this is played, but it seems like it is…
but if u really puttin grams on da block..betta keep ya hands on a glock
i'll kill ya "grandmother" by beatin her ass with a "grandfather-clock"
decent closer, was aight

overall you had a decent drop too, punches were okay, some played
but okay…decent flow to it too…
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