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Originally Posted by .MictoriouS.
||..Clench your Teeth when I punch this Da-Chiller… I’ll just have to Rip You-Iller…Besides .Mic. Overcook This One like a Forgetful Griller..
....good punches but multi's were lacking
||..Like 'Conflict Between Animals' I Clash-Cats! Yur Nothing But Past-Stats.. 'Hiding Secrets From Within' Like A Crack-Stash!! 'Club Records' And Bash-Facts Since I Got Yur 'Life Passing Before Yur Eyes' Like A Fuckin Flash-Back!!!...
..again good punches but you trying to squeeze too much in between
||..Yur Skills Ill? No! Yur Wack? By Far-Dork.. Kid Around And Get Poked Cuz My Bar-Forks! 'No Ones Seein Yur Shots' Like A Dark-Court!! And Yu Going The Whole Ten Yards? Ha! Yu One Yard-Short!!!...
...i like the lines but they do not flow, and ya structure is making me blind...
||..I'll Makem-Tear! The Spits-Yu-Fear.. Come With Punches? First Make 'Em Hit-Yu-Queer! Gimme My Space; Or Get Lit-With-Years(Lightyears)!! The Last Licks-Are-Near Since I Got This Man Sayin 'Oh Baby!' More Than Britney-Spears!!!.
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well not much to say...u need to structure ya verse better and not try to cram ya multis...
a rap catastrophe attack the wackest geeks this kat is bashed 'n weak
actually, ya tracks wouldn't be dope if ya mic was stashed with weed
..good flow very clean, nice punch
i'm burnin ya son, still ya returnin the love buy quotin my shit
claim ya doper than this.. cmon, you know ya own spits, kid focus a bit
.....ehh decent punch , coulda been better
im nice 'n i'm raw, wanna be violent, i'll stick a knife in ya jaw
dicin a whore, so hopefully you cant talk shit, let alone write anymore
...lol like the second line, nice multi's
leave this bitch ta medics, spits like 6 or 7 ripped schitzophrenics
all over the place knocked into nova 'n space the kids shits hysteric
good ender
overall omb wins this because he knows how to flow and structure his multi's
mic ya verse was better suited for a reg battle
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