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Old 02-05-05, 03:38 PM   #10
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
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Is it WORDPLAY YOU SEEK, ………or gay FOREPLAY WITH GEEKS,
You must STAY WITH BEATS..?, cuz I don’t PRAY FOR WEAKS,(weeks)
...digging this opener...better than other opener
While writing were you CHAFFED FOR AIR…?...four me to “LAUGH IS FAIR”,
E=MC SQUARE…? ya missin structure cuz ya equations ONLY HALF THERE,
...like ya flow here, doesnt match what Kon wants but i like it anyway
When STEPPIN-TRY SIGHT, im discountin ya thread like REFFING TAI(tie)FIGHTS,
Ill be POLITE Your twice the pussy I thought, like JOGGING BYE DYKES,(bi-dykes)
...not really fee;ing punch but i know what you meant
This LEAGUE,…. im IN IT TO STAY….cuz It only takes a MINUTE TO SAY,
I’de MIMIC YOUR WAYS, but to spit it would be over the LIMITS OF GAY,!!

nice closer....
ya verse isnt really what is expected but i thinks its good overall



messing with me is consiquential, ill demolish your dentals, i consist essentials,
ill bring the facts of credential, thinking he shows potential, lets learn fundimentals,
......mulit's yes...but point? no
you dont wanna show me no disrepect, his dicks erect, come near me and ill snap ur neck,
my punches connect, picking you up the council must be wrecked, leave you full of neglect,
multis again but once again no fire in the lines
you might be known, ill smuggle in 2 bottle that connect to your dome, just like al capone,
bin hit dat much u'll be pissin out bladder stones, u get so scared ur shadow walks u home,
decent line, like the Capone line...a lil better
your unknown to da game, i check ur profile all i saw was ur name, u appear to be lame,
im be somthin u neva became, wit ur fake proclaims, take cova cuz i got u sighted-n-aimed,
threw a personal in there, pretty good..
overall ya verse lacked a point thats my my
vote goes to.........Daz