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Old 02-05-05, 03:44 PM   #33
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: hotshh!

Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames!
nice opener, punch line was hard & connected
Nobody would want to Son you... your disowned, now Disappear
Keep dropping that trash and you gonna be 'Killing ya own Career'
…decent punch here, wasn’t as hard though
Dont call me out cuz in the Tourney I did good and U watched me
You on my Dick... Head games?... I'm renaming You 'Cock Tease'
pretty decent, nutting much here though
If I chopped and threw your dome...you'll get ahead of me Crazy
Da Council should Drop em faster than Mothers with Heavy Babies
pretty decent closer, punch landed

Overall you had a decent drop, punches were hard (well some of them)
And they landed, the structure was in place and the flow to it was good
Overall you had a decent drop………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦

Just take off like "race cars," this kid aint pure
Hot shit? so this faggot really does "burn rubber"
[b]hardly rhymed here, weak punch to it

Like tight clits with big dicks, kid, just fucking "split"
And when talking bout skills, hotshh! aint got "it"
decent I guess, punch wasn’t hard enuff though
And ya rhymes suck, your shit man, shouldn't be proud
I provide chears... hot"shh" just silences the crowd
okay…punch was weak here…
Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"
decent punch, prolly ur best…

Overall you had a decent drop, some of them punches were weak and
Hardly made any connects, flow was good and the structure to it was
Pretty decent…overall you could’ve came way harder……………………………
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