Voted For: Sand

Kon, Look at your record, the battle figure's highlight ya fatigue.
I mean, you've hit rock bottom, like you been dropped in the sea.
^^^please that was just sorry
This bitch think's just cuz his dad's a crip, automatically make's you ghetto?
Kon couldn't be part of the street if you hung from a ledge and let go.
^^^ ok but no great
Kon's like bulletproof glass, act's hard, but Sand can see right through.
Plus since all your audio's are wack......The microphone spit's back at you!
^^^ nice closer well not really good as a closer but good line.

^^^ over all good flow and style was cool. so i'm give it a 3/7
advise: stop talking to the readers and talk to him, add more mults and punches(especially since it's a short battle), talk about thing that the readers would no about him.

Monkey Speaks Giberish, Sand's Lingo, Only a guerilla Could Understand
This Kid Really Has Trouble Elevatin, He's Still On The First Form of Man!
^^^still on the first form of man? i don't understand so wack
Pm'd Me Statin He Was Bored-N-wanted to battle, Pre-write? No Surprise?
But Dat Wasnt The Case,I realized dis Nasty Fuck Likes Gettin
^^^you put three words on the wrong line lololol but the line woulda still been wack
Beat By Guys Your Futures not Existent like 28-02-06 Times Up, Your Hour Glass? finished
So Strut Your ass back over to RB, where Herbs Suck your Dick for a livin'
^^^i think that the last two lines should be switched and then i woulda liked the closer

^^^ over all a good style and flow. so i'ma give you a 2/7
Advise: mostly the same for you as for him but you also gotta reread and see if you mis spelled shit(or put words on the wrong line wink wink)

vote: sand or karmabarz (cause the title is sand but his verse say karmabarz)

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