Voted For: J~FOUR

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you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/
i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/
played played played.......3/10

yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/
we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/
lol nice...i liked this...had to think about it for a sec....but good concept here...8/10

break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/
i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/
not good.....4/10

yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/
like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/
not too good of a closer....but better than some of your bars....5/10

overall....................20/40


J four........
You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game
Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name"[1]
good play off name....nice opener...7/10

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Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs
cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks"[2]
nice wordplay here....most wont get this....7/10

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N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows"
Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows"[3]
another good play off of name....8/10

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So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled
Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's"[4]
decent closer here......7/10

overall......29/40



J fours just came with harder punches.....more complex....just all around a better verse.....RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE.....link in sig....thanks

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