GG Haterz
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Hells Fire: You need to work on your topicals. They make sense, but barely. Internal rhymes were aight, but overall lacking in what I consider a topical. Vocab was ok, but it makes your topical too complicated. Flow was off a lot. Work on your spelling too. 5/10
Babylon: I couldn't help but laugh when I read this. Overall, I like how you twisted the topic, and your flow was down. Overall, work on writing more complex and in depth verses, you have 50 lines. 7/10
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Originally Posted by Twisted Visions
50 nickle=less than 50 cent, go back to school you idiot
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
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