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Old 02-06-05, 06:20 AM   #15
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Voted For: E.C

well the battles where pretty much even....but im jjust goona have ot give it to you for not strectching your lines as much as th other guy....

EC...this was a pretty decent verse not that good but you are elevating....also wrk on your vocab...you used some very basic words and your punches where kinda played...nothing really hit...but your strvuture won this for oyu


HOT....your structure loose this for you plain and simple....you shoudl battle agian but fix your strucute...
your verses where not that much better than EC but they where in deed better but you also used alot more words in each sentence to make them better punches and shit....just fix your structure and stop with the capitol letters..

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