Voted For: upfront

upfront took this plain and simple.

upfront had good structure, good flow, some allright punches. some personals, a little bit of wordplay and multi action. and he came across pretty hard.

dizee you basically just wrote a paragraph. no structure at all, to hard to pick out aflow or anything this way. you gotta fix your structure and make out your lines into bars.

v/ upfront

return the favour, link is in the sig