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Old 02-06-05, 11:27 AM   #12
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hotshh, good verse overall, i liked the fact you used werdplay,,ya multi's
werent as simple as marv's, ya verse was deffinately more consistent throughout.
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marv, honestly ya effort level was jus wasent there dawg, you had 1 bar i thought was aight, the rest was really simple n wasnt hard hitting in terms of multi's or punches.
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vote hotshhh
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!