Voted For: Drama Queen

well first i think it was a bad topic for a guy to write about so i give props to third shift for trying but he could decline and asked for a better topic so no mercy.

D.Q.- i'm gonna break this judgement into two section like you did for your battle
1st: it was intense i was reading to see what happen next not just to vote. there was a good flow and ok style and great mults. but i don't get it were you saying you were a lesbian???(NICE) i like the way you end the first part. was thought it was going to be bad with the way you opened it but it got better.
2nd: i thought this one was more intense the the first one. still a good flow and even better multas. alot of question i had in the beginning were answered here(thats good)very creative closer, but i don't think he would be gay if he said that. idk if the whole story sounded so realist but it was a good story. i like the vocab used, but i got tripped up on theses lines "Steve holds me tight, whispering sweet words,telling me what really mattered
Heart bruised by her cold rejection but I don't need her false affection" (who is this her i thought you were talking about steve) overal very nice one of the best topicals i've seen. 8.75/10

3rd-in a way yours was really creative i think the lines were more creative then the idea. the flow was alittle rough but sylte was ok you had really hot multas too. i especially liked the opening and closing parts. however some times it seem like it was jumping arond alot and not really staying on topic. overal it was a good battle i give you a 6.5/10

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