wow this battle is hella old.. lol we not even RB relaunched no more.. lol but yea my critique:

Genesis:
Without further adue, we will murder you two, Burn up these dudes
Hang on my words, like nerds tryin to learn from a nuese
Abuse to this herb, Saftey? bitch ass punk's spittin fakely
Catz think of Muhammad 'Ali' ghostwritin, the way ur writtens are shaky
Hate me? ha!...not phasin my gist, Ill leave u blazed to a crisp
Cuz u couldnt knuckle us if i wrote our names on ya fists!
bitch, cant catch my drift, so throw it, Man i explode kids
Ya nitch? Yeah ur fuckin funny...only with a broke dick!
shit is hopeless, ur speech just stinks, ur just the bleekest shrimp
Pimp? Sure ur off the chain.....Cuz I replaced the weakest link
A gimmick to rap battles, extinct Ali to stop its mocking flaw
Cuz you'all could try to write for crowds, still couldnt draw applause
Saws hit your cranium, Chraish him? Man hear our comparisson
Cuz fuck the one to embrass, you'all an embarrassment.

the bold ones are the best punches in the your verse..

vs.

Hot Streak's:
E-yo, here we go, concepz and Streak is here, we're runnin' this show
shortY and Genesis' rhymes are weak, these bitches can't bring in da flow
My mellifluous flows are fuckin' destroyin' both of you ridiculous hoes
I got these fuckin' lyrical average Joes lined up in meticulous rows
In particulars bros, that means that I'm gonna have you beggin' on da floor
Have ya lookin' for this battle's back door once u find out what I got in store
You can be sure of one thing, muthafuckas, you are sure not gonna like it
Got lotsa niggas like ya'll after gettin' merked wanna be Streak's sidekick
I"ll get so gangsta in this battle that I'll make sure you'll never battle again
Spittin' bullets, my friend, cripplin' ya and hauntin' ur dreams till ur life's end
This fool ^^^ got rhymes as played as SegaGenesis, I merk ya and reminisce
Genesis? I can easily fuckin' hammer this piece of shit, killa can depend on this
To take a win, I'll attack ur mind so furious you'll need triple doses of Excedrin
Ironic how RB's biggest dickheads are battlin' those soon to have all RB's wins
Agreein' to a battle with killa and Streak? Dawgs, that action was circumspect
The master's have now entered the forum, so bitches, it's time to genuflect.

The store/back door line was your best punch in the battle.. you had a good set up for punches but you never threw any hard ones.. besides that one. and your structure is really messed up..
MY VOTE/ Genesis

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