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Old 02-06-05, 01:36 PM   #21
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: Tstorm

Empire:
I'll shoot dis bitch evry week, cos hez subscribed 2 my magazine..
Cuz frankly tstorms linez r neva eva eyed, not even by mabeline..
Very nice opener Empire, good wording & nice flow
Fracture ur spine, and put ma point 2 ya bullshit facts......
Cuz hiz lines culdnt b str8...
If they were formed up on bicycle racks!....
nice set up but not very effective
T's-Storm's r light, they just feeble and ghostly showers.....
An shit, u culdnt elevate ur skills, blessed wit Supermans powers!
an aight closer, i expected you to come up wit something more effective tho, the first half was just right, the superman half was wack..

Seemed like you rushed this battle a lil'.. however, this is pretty decent for a 3 bars.. you have to complete ya punches and make them effective, you start ya bars off really good but end it wit a terrible second half..

Tstorm:
no life or day-job, this guys on here almost 24hours a day
heard the saying..but in your case "hard work dosent pay"
Best opener- nice personal and set up..
i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!
^^another nice personal.. nice punch lol
ya lyrical skillz out-balanced, like a fat chick on a see-saw
standing still on a golf course..this guy couldnt met-a-fore!
this didn't rhyme unless you have an accent.. but other than that nice meta in the second half.. first half nice meta also...

aight i feel this battle was a lil' too short but Tstorm wit the bars you spit, you took the battle cuz you came harder, had some nice metaphors.. nice personals, and the second bar was a really good punch and personal.. Overall, you came a lil' harder than Empire.. that's why you took it..
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