Thread: blitz vs Audios
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Old 02-06-05, 01:44 PM   #9
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Voted For: Audios

hmm....pretty one sided battle here, Audios takes it like butter

face it, lyricaly you lack, i read your old verses they're wack
you've allready clicked accpet battle, now theres no turing back
--7/10....liked the first line, but second is too played out already

hiding your personals, 3 name changes, and your record reset, i see
bring your alaias to this battle, odds are they'll still vote for me
--9/10, great originality man, this is my fav line

you can tell this kids herb, 3 days to drop a verse of six lines
im starting to think blitz stands for..... rap and wack combined
--8/10, nice finisher, maybe coulda had 2nd line reworded for better punch, but still sweet line

24/30.....solid spit all together audios, very nice flow, structure was good, vocab was solid, punches flowed nicely, personals, you had everything man, too bad your opponent didnt come as hard, i just suggest working on the multis a little more, vocab coulda been litle better, but nice verse, keep elevatin yo

Blitz, i dunno man, didnt really come in this one....flow wasnt there, structure im not sure about, vocab was plain, punches were more like flicks, you had plenty of multis, that wsa good, but you kept using same words over and over, repetition is bad man, just keep elevatin

man this guy this his good but wack put him under attack
audios but ur doing text name and ya rhymes need a wack-a-snack
--4/10, weak, didnt really understand it

"no bullshit" well u sudnt be here,all u do is spilt shit
u think ur rhymes were good but they were shit cudnt resist hitting submit
--6/10, first line was solid, second could been reworded better, but this was hands down your best line, li was feelin it

this is easy admit ya crap ya stuck in a trap of my rhymes need a slap
ya've snap ya strap, wrap and snap ya rhymes ur a wack chap
--5/10, okay finisher, first line i felt, but second, just too much rhyming, didnt really do anythin, gotta take 'em out with tha finisher

15/30, not bad, but not great, keep elevating, expand tha vocab, read up on personals and punches, come hard and you should be fine, wird

---Overall Vote: Audios
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