Voted For: J~FOUR

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you weak with yah flows, sorta like eerkle with the-hoes/
i'm gettin all the bitchez and yur steady jurkin yah-hose/
^^not a bad opener.....
yur to slow to match the witt that i'm spittin, get-back/
we got an equal text record but really yur only-half, do the-math/
nice punch attempt for the second half.. lol
break it, roll it, light it, then smoke it, focus, you about to get broke kid/
i'mah leave you bloody and dyin. blood all over you, soakin/
first half was wack, try flowin another way, you dun have to put EMPTY multis in your verse.. it serves no purpose..
yur too herbish, yah weak to bleak and too-faded/
like mcdonalds meat, yah shit is too out-dated/
aight closer nothing too special....

J~Four:
You lame, cause ya name gettin R.I.P'ed from The Game
Cause i got "4 red dots round ya body" like "charecters in ya name"
^^nice opener, good personals....
Damn, Face the facts, before you get ransacked wit macs
cause J Just "Ate Eight(88)" Like "Dale Jarret BackPacks"
^^nice personal again.. lol funny shit ha ha..
N You Get More "Flipped Birds" than "Gymnastic Sparrows"
Cause I "Tear You From The Middle" But Im "Just Following Arrows"
most creative in the battle.. nice metaphors and good use of personals.. BEST bar so far..
So No Double You For You, Unless You Wanna Get Impaled
Cause you like "Mexican Call Girls" the Way You "Pickin up El's"
nice closer and the best in the battle....

You don't have to explain your bars.... it's understood wit the " "....... and stop numbering and spacing ya bars.. obviously you not a newbie.. not wit this type of content.. fix that up, cuz your verse is really good..
Good luck you two, but J Four you took this one..
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