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Old 02-06-05, 06:28 PM   #10
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Voted For: The Black Plague

Kordozars Verse
When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads..
Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad..
eh weak and didnt flow good...
Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps?
Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak..
thats his screename but it doesnt go together with anything else that you said in the line...it doesnt make sense
Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps..
Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps..
lol ok
17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him?
Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him..
ok
All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium..
Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire..
wtf?...didnt rhyme and i have no clue what you even were trying to say cuz everything was mistyped or the e-net thug typing thing idk...
Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar
Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires....
pretty good closer...

Black Plagues Verse
Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags
I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag
eh...
Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen”
And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason
lol ok
Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck
Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck
wasnt complex and could of been worded better but ok personal
Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation
This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation
lmao...ok
Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie
Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me”
nah wasnt feelin it...
Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store
Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours
good rhyming and wording...ok punch
But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see?
Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D.
lol best line of verse it was pretty good

overall i thought black plague had a little bit of the edge here in punches and vocab...kordozar you had some good shit but i just thought blacks was a little harder but i think both were kinda weak...no hate though good luck to both

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