hmm this is ok, pretty straight forward nothing to tech or surprising.
This is a good topic, you should come more original,These lyrics are predictable, when you think of this topic,this is exactly how i thought the lyrics were,which isnt a good or a bad thing.
Its just....if this is gonna be audio,wouldnt you want to surpirse the listner and leave them like ......hmmmm this drop made me think,you know?

any way just my view.