Voted For: ~Da_Illest~

da illest......
ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel//
ehh ok opener....5/10

even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u//
cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo//
ok attempt at wordplay here.....6/10

there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun//
so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1
kinda played here.....4/10


overall...........15/30


renegade.........
Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews..
You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose
good multis....but thats all....4/10

Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade
Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid
set up line is garbage...didnt hit....3/10

Spit again me I come hard like wild boar
Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard
ehh not feelin it....4/10

Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white
And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic
decent wordplay here....6/10

Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez
Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised
good set up line....punch was weak...5/10


overall......22/50


i just felt that renegade didnt come with as hard of punches as illest did.....both had ok wordplay...both had bad structure....illests punches won this for him.....

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