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Old 02-06-05, 11:06 PM   #20
MaRVJay
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u won dis only cuzz u had some personals but alot of ya bars aint ryhme...like RYHMES & ARMS....CAREER & WHEEL...fix dat shit fam.....integ ya structure was terrible and ya bars were so long dat it a take a minute 2 flow em and ur punches were weak u had no personals even tho u spit more still dont mean shit if u aint sayin nothin hott

opener-ghost kind of weak but betta than his
structure-ghost..integ ya lines were 2 long stop tryind a fit so much shit in dem
punchlines-ghost
creatvity-ghost
multis-integ
wordplay-nun
personals-ghost
finisher-integ...ghost shit aint ryhme
enjoyed-ghost...he had a betta verse overall

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