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Old 02-07-05, 01:13 AM   #8
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LISTENING...

well the beat is pretty dope.....

wiating....
waiting...
waiting...damn hurry up..lol


your vocals are too high......
your quality is not that good....basic rhymes....
basic vocab......
kinda nice....its liek you are trying too hard to spit knowledge...you tried so hard that when you where writing it you frorgot about anythign else....

kinda good but at the same time ive heard better from alot of other people...stay up and elevate..........

good..well decent.....and short//..


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