Anyone who says they have rap perfected is dense.

Look, Goodluck with what you do son.. But unless you want to be like Chingy, then your going to need to learn to write shit people give a fuck about. I listened to your mixtape shit? Nobody wants to listen to some kid that lives with his parents, whos mom paid for his soundclick rap about the struggle and people getting killed in the ghetto..

Now your on some Jesus shit. Rap music is secular, whether you like it or not. I just really aint feeling your style at the moment. Your going to need to work on it a real lot before you talk like your making moves.