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Old 02-07-05, 12:48 PM   #5
Van Ished
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Clam has a dope flow, and good delivery on it, I can't tell the quality cuz the hifi link wasn't workin for me

M.B. you need to put more effort into it, of course you prolly realize that. and pace yourself, you sound rushed to spit in some spots. the is off-balance cuz you have one guy rapping for one minute, then you have another guy rappin for two minutes straight, it dulls out the track, you should at least repeat the hook once and split your verse into two parts
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