really good especially for bein a newbie could tell u did this elseware had alot of multi's which really grabs all the homies attention but u coulda made it a lil longer cuz it was kinda short keep it up holmes and peep mine it's called "complicated Freestyle" the title might not be much but the lyrics are tight in my personal opinion but just leave your most god honest feedback no fake kissin up shit like some people like ta do