Voted For: Skriptz

skriptz................

This is a crew battle son, in this battle your not going to last
I better get ready cause its time…

Quote:
Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze
to murk ur lame ass
decent here....i like how you used things he said....hit good....7/10

I’ll grab your damn punches and form them into a ball
Cuz once SM destroys Cold Steel your…

Quote:
Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze
(crew is gonna fall)
decent.....hit pretty good.....7/10

Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you?
The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew
nice personal.....7/10

Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make?
Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate
hit good as well.....7/10

I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet?
Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet
nice closer....hit good.....8/10


overall..........36/50


JR freeze............
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Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre"
Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate"
ehh ok...i wasnt feelin it that much though....good vocab...6/10

My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions”
Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction”
nice....7/10

Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime
Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind”
good wordplay here....7/10

You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius
Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis”
blowjob lines= played.....5/10

Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind”
And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”......
nice wordplay here...i was feelin it.....8/10

overall.........33/50


yea both had pretty good verses....but i had to go with skriptz because his punches just hit a lot harder.....jr had good vocab and wordplay....but some of his bars werent as good as the others.....whereas skriptz stayed consistent with his in his whole verse......skriptz also had good personals.....add some personals to your verse JR and this would have been closer.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR SKRIPTZ......link in sig....thanks

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