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Voted For: J.R. Freeze

okay...dis battle was kind of weak skriptz tried da get creative and made his self look dumb...jr u finally switched ya structure datz a good look but u spit as hard as u usually do.....

Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you?
The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew
^^^good opener/personal....dis was ya best line fam

Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make?
Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate
^^^^??? WHUT DAT DIDN'T MAKE SENSE & YA RYHME SCHEME IS DA SAME AS A NEWB
I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet?
Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet
^^^decent i aint gon say its all da wack but dis shit is weak..plus u worded it wrong at da end

overall...skriptz i seen some of ya old shit dis da worst u eva spit i mean u didn't try da be creative or nothin nun of ya lines stood out and da qoutin shit in da beginin was 4 nothin

Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre"
Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate"
^^^good opener i dont really care about vocab but datz ya style

My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions”
Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction”
^^^nah wasn't feelin it fam

Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime
Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind”
^^^^nice punchline good creativity

You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius
Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis”
^^^^^sorri i didn't get it fam

Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind”
And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”......
^^^^^^^^first line was kind of played but da second line was type hott

overall...j.r u had some creativity in ya verse no personals...it kind of sound pre written cuzz u could of spit dat verse 2 anybody nahmean but u win dis battle with ya creativity and punchlines..

return da favor..ya'll