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Old 02-08-05, 11:28 AM   #7
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From: Flint
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WHAT UP MA...YEAH IT WAS GOOD...THE FLOW WAS GOOD...VOCAB WAS GOOD...STAYED ON TOPIC THE WHOLE THING...THE STRUCTURE WAS GOOD TO...YOU SHOULD ADD TO THAT AND MAKE IT EVEN BETTER...

RETURN THE FAVOR...
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