Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade


goldenshellz battle me, whoa son is bold....
but he garbage, only hot when my gun explode....
aight...

dis cat feelin kinda sad somebody give him a hug....
cuz aint no gunpowder in him so dis nigga's a dud...
cool,

i shoot da nine and put some of u in yaself...
den laugh at u, like dummy stop abusin yaself...
ummmm ok....

tell me why dis nigga gotta be so lame...
and why khaos spit dope shit like he eat cocaine...
mmm ok....

and with yo name the whole board knows u silly...
like "diarhea" dawg ya fuckin "flows is shitty"...
decent..
now a bad verse flow good, punches aight could of been betetr and more original....

NEXT....

ur a fuckin renegade? old like em and jay in da past
get rid of this newbie fast, my bloods'll 1-8-7 ya ass
ok fow thats it....

quick to challenge a lethal threat but u have no prominence
like a mexican, u could "hop"the fence,smashed by my dominence
good vocab, decent...

u got 3 days nigga, i hope u make in time
matter fact i should say fuck this verse and see if hes online
umm no..

ur not even woth my lines, better yet worth my rhymes
every vote i get is me tellin u 5 times*
WTF???

ur fucked now, i could spare u become a beggar
i have ya shirts lookin more red then the tomatoe that hit swartzaneggar

WTF?? no weak ending... u had it at one point then fell da fuck off mount everest.... decent flow, punches was lacked, creativeness was ok, vocab aight... but just went weak at the end and started it off kinda weak...

next time just go hard from the jump...