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Old 02-08-05, 09:04 PM   #27
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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From: East Coast
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Voted For: Judicial

see im causin devistation,hurt,pain and elaberation
2 dis kidz mental deformatation, u got no rhyme stabelization
buncha big words but no real punch...decent anyway
dog wut im really sayin,ur rhymes iz nutttin but lyrical laxitation
ima spirtual-.....more like a godly rap-creation
wit da evilization of satan,now u persperatin, prayin
dat a few pity votes'll get u outta da self-dug grave dat u layin.........ehhhh decent like the 1st line, and the satan line as well..
im polution 2 ya brain,n u still cant spit ill enuf 2get a win
afta dis,u'll still b waitin 4 da left column of ur record 2 begin
ok decent punch not all that



a fucking dog's phecisis./(Dog Shit)
I'm from the gutter but you the one who sleeping with rats. I'm in the black skull cap, treat you like an alley cat./
"im and your concept" needs some work...decent bar
I'm in the maybach benz but you pushing your bike. And I'm the one who judging you I give you 20 to life./
its not the self glorify thats wack...its the fact dat we know u have no maybach
And I aint that nice, but my shit be clean. Thinking you beating me guess again like jeans./
....noooo thats played since biggie was alive!

overall gutter shit was decent but too familiar
jud didnt really have punches but was fresher to read
vote...jud

now peep this
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1947283