Wow.....yea it was....yea i uh....it was.......hold on. (deep breath) I couldn't really post an opinion cause it's scheme is so basic and the puns and jokes are kinda weak but.....at some points i was kinda into the rhyme.

call me the best spitter cause im smarter than you
the lyrics i spit are quick to rip ya heart into two
YOU WERE DOING IT PRETTY DECENT
Veteran status, all you other artists are new
i don't like to pick fights but i've started a few
THIS ONE MADE ME LAUGH KINDA
so yea this wasn't bad but i wouldn't drop out of college and start searching for a deal yet. Elevate on your punches and puns, your multiples and keep that style that you seem to bring to your verse and you'll be good.

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