Yo, I don't know if that was some kinda hate rhyme toward somebody in specific, but anyway I liked because you were good at makin sense of it and makin it work.
The only thing that bothered me was, the fact that you seemed like u were in a battle, that took away from the whole experience, wondering who u were talkin to.
Other than that It was coo, still a little bit Amatuer, but'chu got potential. Keep spittin dude.

Oh, Almost forgot. Tell me what'chu think of this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175477