yo..i could tell u a beginner no beef but u need ta elevate, i'll give ya some quick tips while i'm at it cuz i'm not just gonna laugh in ur face and never bother to read ur shit again i gotta give u some hope. k, u need to know bout how ta add multi's in ur shit the more syllabales u add in ur lyrics the more it grabs the readers attention and if u watch how the rest of atleast decent rappers do it, they mostly spit shit that people could relate or feel ta what ur saying it also helps if u read there shit too and leave ur honest opinion in the feed u send to 'em...remember the more respect u give on this site the more respect u get