Voted For: SQUAD-UP

Squad-Up

chea, uh i dont play... tell my boy to gimme my beam
wit a bigger "Scope" on it than Jimmy Iovine's
decent opener
ya bars just wack, i eat em like lunch snacks
put lumps in ya shoulder blades bigger than hunch backs
this was coo
t-unit could bump back, .....but if he does that
i'll dump that,oneclap put u in the dirt where the bugs at
coo
Fuck that, u run ya jaws but neva win
ya a "new era" rapper cuz ya bars never "fitted" in
i kinda wasnt feelin this but it's decent
u first n im last? then its time for us to switch ends
tha punches "strike" harder than the hands on Big Ben
kinda coo
shit ends, u was never "fuckin str8" so ya dick bends
only time T was "on the ball" was Bic Pens......EASSSSY
this was a nice closer

overall...this you had a pretty coo verse...punches hit kinda hard...some multies and a little wordplay...i kinda wasnt feelin one bar...but it was decent...and the rest of your verse was decent...coo verse...8.5/10

TuNit

yo i'll leave ya squad down like they got struck in a drive by SHOOTIN
you aint never gonna get no 'kicks'...unless footlockers 'RECRUITIN''
decent opener
am bootin niguhs in the face an leavin em to ROT
so its deez rhymes you gotta worry about not gettin SHOT
this was kinda weak cuz
we all know your NOT a thug or even part of a SQUAD
an i got artilary that'll leave you 'holy' as GOD
a little played but decent
you an hookers are 2 peas in a POD, why? cuz ya both SUCK
steppin ta me, u gon need more than LUCK, cuz i'll rearrange ya facial features like NIP/TUCK
kinda wasnt feelin this one...and it was a lil' streched
ya rhymes about as 'PHAT' as a supermodel on a DIET
so errr, now ima go librarian on ya ass n tell you ta 'BE QUIET'
this was kinda weak and basic...i've heard it toooo much

overall...your verse was aight...but you had a couple of basic, weak, and decent rhymes and shit...you gotta be a little bit more creative...you had a couple of good punches tho...multies were decent i guess...but work on your structure and punches a bit more...5.5/10

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Net Record(56-9)

RV Record(13-3)

Overall Record
69-12