Thread: J Dot vs D.T.
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Old 02-09-05, 03:32 PM   #5
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Voted For: D.T.

Damn.. nice battle here, but imma go wit Epical on this one...

J-Dot, you had a nice verse...First line was wack, honestly... threaten to kill you? wasn't feelin ya opener.. but u got better as u went on.. the "kill the beef" line was good, but a lil played.. Shaq line was not bad, jus way played, seen it comin.. I liked the Iraq line.. it didn't come all the way together.. didint understand how I rack and ANthrax related to each other, but it was a nice line.. lazy boy line was good too, and ya closer was prolly ya best line... I think you coulda worked on complexity and personals, u had decent punches but coulda come wit more personals and a more complex verse.. not bad tho

Epical, nice verse here too.. Openr was aiite, but the retard line was kinda played.. seen shit like it before... A lil stretched but not bad... Ya 2nd bar was dope, nice line there wit a nice personal tied in...I wasn't really understandin ya Pencils line, didn't come together for me.. THe All of RV and Barbie lines was nice, nice personal there.. The Arm amputees line was way played, jus way played out.. not a bad line tho, jus coulda been more original.. Ya closer started off nice wit the walt disney line, but the last line was self glorification.. not a bad line, but shoulda kept it outta a battle... I think you had a more complex verse with better and more personals, and nice punches throughout...

Overall, Epical takes this with more complexity and better and harder hittin personals... JDot nice verse, just coulda had more personals, and coulda came wit more complex shit, so my vote goes to Epical..

V/Epical
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