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Old 02-09-05, 06:02 PM   #4
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jea it seems like u copied jada a lil too much on the lyrics, especially in the 1st and 2nd verse, chorus is choppy and quality is bad overall, ur 3rd verse is the best, flow is off on the whole track, i can see when u pause to wait for the beat a lil, but this shii wasnt the worst ive heard.
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