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Old 02-09-05, 08:05 PM   #24
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Nice Verse, Came Pretty Well With Your Vocabulary, Your Structure Was Alright But That Still Needs A Little Work Any Way Vocabulary Was Cool, Had Some Decent Punches In Your Verse, Thing's You Need Is Multi's And Meta's That'll Help You Out Alot Man...8/10

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Okay Wow, You Use The Same Vocabulary In Almost All Your Ish, You Need To Up Your Vocabulary, Also Your Rhyme Scheme Needs Work, Your Structure Was Decent But You Need That Rhyme Scheme, Also Throw in Some Meta's And multi's It'll Help You As Well Both Needed To Come Harder But....7/10

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