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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
very one sided...
Ghost--
-ma merk dis kat, cause out of us 2, im the only real vet you see/
this fag gets *owned* so much he lost his own *will power* as an *MC*/
=not bad, little weak but good intro to rest of your verse 6/10
-this dude couldn't reach my level on da *stairway to heaven*/
wit da way dis dude rhymes, im suprised if hes over 11
=first line is good, maybe second line coulda played with it more, 6/10
-actin like he need to be babied, some1 get this fag a rattle/
lazy ass aint even took the time to learn to set up a battle
=nice personal, 7/10
-i doubt if this motha fucka'll even take the time to read this/
of course, id stop carin too, if i got k.o.ed by CANNIBAL FETUS
=hahaha, laughed at this one, 8/10
-been in three battles since he joined...and aint got a single vote/
thas pretty sad, since all the verses he had, was pre-wrote
=eh, okay closer, 7/10
total: 36/50....not bad, little basic as you say, but your opponent showed no fight, try addin multis you know, up the vocab, flow was nice, punches/personals got the idea just make em harder next time, keep elevatin man, good job
MC Will Power...didnt really come in this one man
-Man i'll merk u, slew u walk right through u...
Crowds they heard u and they boo'd u...
=i read and said boo...first wasnt bad, but....3/10
-M8 u cant merk MC Will Power, cos if u try things WILL turn sour, just like the time i fucked ur bitch in the shower...
i swear u bitch had orgasms by the hour...
=haha, i laughed, this is your best line, but its not that great....5/10
-So next time u wanna battle me remember u bitch got fucked by a G.
=very weak, very.....3/10
total: 11/30......man, didnt really try in this one eh, lack of flow, structure, vocab....punches didnt really hit, you werent even really insulting him, this didnt really have anythin positive, sorry man, gotta elevate alot, at least try next time....wird
vote: Ghost
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