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Voted For: Invektive
i liked this battle
Dex:
-I wanted a battle but got 60mins and 6 lines
Your busy packing shit rhymes to spit in the nick of time
=solid opener, first line coulda used some work 7/10
-Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke
Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke
=eh, wasnt really feelin it, little choppy 6/10
-Transferring a dictionary is how your betting to spin
Only thing phixional here is you getting the win
=sweet closer, best line 8/10
total: 21/30....nice spit man, kinda weak with the punches coming off, good personals/multis, but vocab was lacking, flow little choppy, and didnt really come out too hard, therefore, punches didnt really hit hard, but overall, not too bad of drop
Invektive, nice
-Dex sees himself in the near future.......you know this dudes confused when
he claims he'll be one of RV's top text heads ....nah you seein optical illusions
=nice play with that thread, good opener 8/10
-you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next?
you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex
=best line here, loved the seoncd one 8/10
-your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it?
you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot
=haha, nice play with the sig too 8/10
total: 24/30....overall, solid drop man, personal were slick, came hard and made your punches more effective, good plays/connections in there (thread, sig, etc), good use of vocab and nice flow, treat to read, haha, keep it up man
---vote: Invektive....better personals, harder punches, creativity and smoother flow...wird
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