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Old 02-09-05, 09:17 PM   #14
Dabatos
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structure ec hot sauce your structure is horrible so uneven which butchers your flow work on shortening your lines and taking out fillers also lose the // they look gay and are un needed
vocab tie neither were impressive both need to up their vocab
multis hot sauce soem of his words were made up to make them buit oh well at least he had some i guess ec throw some multis in there kid
punches both came pretty played but im going ot give it to ec you both need to be more creative and find some better personals
good battle to both though work on the things i stated
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